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    "Simon what's going on?" Lewis asked his friend. They were for some reason in yogtowers asleep on the floor."Simon, Simon" he repeated over and over.
    "What I..." Simon stopped mid sentence. "What the..."
    "Ya I know, I think it's just a dream though" Lewis commanded. Simon was pinching himself after hearing this.
    "It's not working!" he screamed.
    "Then Simon were in Mincraftea" Lewis said with a sound of defeat in his voice. This is going to be interesting.
So ya my first post on DA
Anyway a while ago I hade an amazing story idea and this is it
I'm planning to post parts of it once every week (Friday, Saturdays, and, Sundays mostly but if I have a break I'll try to get some then)
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vodkaffee Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist
Mincraftea, brilliant.
I'll just criticize that you should work on punctuation, there are some missing commas there
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iznj Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I stink at spelling and grammar so expect some errors
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PreciousAngelWings Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Minecraftia! Gotta love that place lol

That's very short but an interesting start :)
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iznj Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I didn't wan't to give to much away :meow:
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